titliyon sa bachpan bhanwaron sa bachpan na jane kahan kho gaya hai shayad teri akhon mei kho gaya hai bachpan ho sake tou lauta do mera wo suhana bachpan. -rahul(22.7.09)
Thanx guys... Nice to c u guys connect with ma thoughts... Feels gud 2 knw evn 2day in dis materialistic world, der r few lik u who still admire the simplicity n innocense of thoughts !!!
tamanna nice poem there are very good metaphor about childhood. u r trying to put off all ur burden and identity which this world has given you and want to be lost in the fairy world of childhood....
in life its only life that indicates us so many things to ,, one who is able to recognise those sign,,,, later he ii be recognised in d society.. dont ever let others know you.. first u recognise urself who u r? jayada to nai ho gya na .. anyway apke sabad or rang kafi milte hai aapas me .. its aatractive make it more megnetic..
I am Amrita Jain, Tamanna being my pseudo name. An artist, a poet, a commerce graduate, an interior designer are my various facets.
Words and colors are my friends helping me explore emotions within me, a glimpse of which you can find in my blog.
Other things I like doing are, experimenting with my culinary skills.. Trying out a few odd tunes on the keyboard.. And now-a-days I am enjoying playing with some graphics in photoshop..
What more do I say about myself. I hope you enjoy the experience of reading my blog.
ausum dear......heard ne thng new ftr so many day...........keep posting...........Pehchan a good name......!!!
ReplyDeletebahutkhoob likha hai,bachpan yaad dila gaya!!!
ReplyDeletetitliyon sa bachpan
bhanwaron sa bachpan
na jane kahan kho gaya hai
shayad teri akhon mei kho gaya hai bachpan
ho sake tou lauta do mera wo suhana bachpan.
-rahul(22.7.09)
u reminded me of my childhood not only coz of d poem but also of profile.
ReplyDeleteg8 writer is buddin..
al d best
i liked ur work very much
Thanx guys... Nice to c u guys connect with ma thoughts... Feels gud 2 knw evn 2day in dis materialistic world, der r few lik u who still admire the simplicity n innocense of thoughts !!!
ReplyDeleteKeep inspiring :) Hope to hear more frm u !!!!!!
Good...........
ReplyDeletema'am this poem is awesome
ReplyDeleteif u want i can frame some music for it
wat say?
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ReplyDeletetamanna
ReplyDeletenice poem
there are very good metaphor about childhood.
u r trying to put off all ur burden and identity which this world has given you and want to be lost in the fairy world of childhood....
very nice poem
ReplyDeleteKeep it up.
well TAMANNA
bachpan ka bholapan aur jawani ka chanchalpan..jhalakta hai ismei..
ReplyDeleteHum sabke dil mei base ek bache ko fir jee uthne ki prerna deti hai yeh lines !!!
apke is pehchaan ki search mei wanna join u.. n feel the joys along side you !!!!
in life its only life that indicates us so many things to ,, one who is able to recognise those sign,,,, later he ii be recognised in d society.. dont ever let others know you.. first u recognise urself who u r? jayada to nai ho gya na .. anyway apke sabad or rang kafi milte hai aapas me .. its aatractive make it more megnetic..
ReplyDeleteNice One
ReplyDeletecute n lovely....it reminds of some of the memorable days!!
ReplyDeletesach.........bachpan ki yaad aa gaiiii..........esa lga kyu bade ho gae yar..chote hi ache the........vry nice
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