sorry dear, there is everything present in this poem, you hv praised mother in every possible way but the soul is missing...i dont know what is missing exactly...but it doesn't hold.... i can say it is a good documentation.....
i dont agree Prashant !! in fact i feel its the best of the lot.. the truthfulness that a child feels for a mother whom she is so deeply connected to is felt !!! i loved it !!!
beautiful wordings, strikes a wonderful chord within. keep it up, i look forward to more especially since i am a budding poet myself, they mean a lot to me.
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Words and colors are my friends helping me explore emotions within me, a glimpse of which you can find in my blog.
Other things I like doing are, experimenting with my culinary skills.. Trying out a few odd tunes on the keyboard.. And now-a-days I am enjoying playing with some graphics in photoshop..
What more do I say about myself. I hope you enjoy the experience of reading my blog.
A very soulful thaught !!
ReplyDeletenice very nice..
ReplyDeletesorry dear,
ReplyDeletethere is everything present in this poem, you hv praised mother in every possible way but the soul is missing...i dont know what is missing exactly...but it doesn't hold....
i can say it is a good documentation.....
i dont agree Prashant !! in fact i feel its the best of the lot.. the truthfulness that a child feels for a mother whom she is so deeply connected to is felt !!! i loved it !!!
ReplyDeletebeautiful wordings, strikes a wonderful chord within.
ReplyDeletekeep it up, i look forward to more
especially since i am a budding poet myself, they mean a lot to me.
what mother and daughter have for each other is the holiest of all understanding... After all mother is the holiest thing alive !
ReplyDeleteNice Poem !
Regards,
Munawar
Maa!
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