Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Pehchaan !

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  1. ausum dear......heard ne thng new ftr so many day...........keep posting...........Pehchan a good name......!!!

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  2. bahutkhoob likha hai,bachpan yaad dila gaya!!!

    titliyon sa bachpan
    bhanwaron sa bachpan
    na jane kahan kho gaya hai
    shayad teri akhon mei kho gaya hai bachpan
    ho sake tou lauta do mera wo suhana bachpan.
    -rahul(22.7.09)

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  3. u reminded me of my childhood not only coz of d poem but also of profile.
    g8 writer is buddin..
    al d best
    i liked ur work very much

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  4. Thanx guys... Nice to c u guys connect with ma thoughts... Feels gud 2 knw evn 2day in dis materialistic world, der r few lik u who still admire the simplicity n innocense of thoughts !!!

    Keep inspiring :) Hope to hear more frm u !!!!!!

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  5. ma'am this poem is awesome
    if u want i can frame some music for it
    wat say?

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  7. tamanna
    nice poem
    there are very good metaphor about childhood.
    u r trying to put off all ur burden and identity which this world has given you and want to be lost in the fairy world of childhood....

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  8. bachpan ka bholapan aur jawani ka chanchalpan..jhalakta hai ismei..

    Hum sabke dil mei base ek bache ko fir jee uthne ki prerna deti hai yeh lines !!!

    apke is pehchaan ki search mei wanna join u.. n feel the joys along side you !!!!

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  9. in life its only life that indicates us so many things to ,, one who is able to recognise those sign,,,, later he ii be recognised in d society.. dont ever let others know you.. first u recognise urself who u r? jayada to nai ho gya na .. anyway apke sabad or rang kafi milte hai aapas me .. its aatractive make it more megnetic..

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  10. cute n lovely....it reminds of some of the memorable days!!

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  11. sach.........bachpan ki yaad aa gaiiii..........esa lga kyu bade ho gae yar..chote hi ache the........vry nice

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