Monday, July 13, 2009

Mother



7 comments:

  1. sorry dear,
    there is everything present in this poem, you hv praised mother in every possible way but the soul is missing...i dont know what is missing exactly...but it doesn't hold....
    i can say it is a good documentation.....

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  2. i dont agree Prashant !! in fact i feel its the best of the lot.. the truthfulness that a child feels for a mother whom she is so deeply connected to is felt !!! i loved it !!!

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  3. beautiful wordings, strikes a wonderful chord within.
    keep it up, i look forward to more
    especially since i am a budding poet myself, they mean a lot to me.

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  4. what mother and daughter have for each other is the holiest of all understanding... After all mother is the holiest thing alive !

    Nice Poem !

    Regards,
    Munawar

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